Escape from the Friendzone by Penguin316

You've known this boy for a while now, and you've got to admit... he's kind of cute. At first, you brushed your feelings off, but recently, they've been getting you. You've been given a chance to escape the friendzone, however. Will you take it?

Sorry if it's stupid, this is my first game.

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Review by Stripes
06 Jan 2018
It was alright. Nothing groundbreaking. Would've liked to see some backstory or something instead of just, "oh ya u liek dis guy hes ur crush." No offense intended, ha ha. But yeah, you can't have a good love story if the two characters don't have any connection. And you can't just state that they have connection; you have to show, don't tell. For example, explaining how the two met and developing their personalities would be nice. Adding a scene where one person defended the other from bullies or helped them when they were feeling down or something would be sweet, even if it is a bit cliche. A little attention to detail could go a long way. Also, the options are pretty limited, and the story itself is short. That's nothing a little practice can't help, though! Good luck with your future work!
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Review by glutenwhip
06 Jan 2018
I liked it a lot! You did a great job. I got the normal ending on my first playthrough. :}
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Written for Quest 5.5
Published 06 Dec 2017

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