Slice of Life
Trial run for writing Choose Your Own Adventure, so don't take it too serious. There's three different 'universes', a couple of good endings, but mainly bad and mediocre ones!
23 Feb 2018
I rate this a 99.999/100.
It's cool how different choices will put you in different worlds, like (spoiler) either Alpha being good or bad.
Only part I didn't like? Well, while it was cool, I found myself skimming over the text because some parts were a bit boring. Maybe it's just me, but maybe you could spice things up a wee bit?
Otherwise, this is awesome, and I'm excited for more. Keep up the good work!
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Mystery Box Of Awesome Adventure Chapter 1
Threats on Gotham
Published 21 Feb 2018
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