Warrior Cats ThunderClan! by FernStone

Comment FernStone

Thanks good bunny also I didn't end up using the names but, I'll find a way to make it up to you! I m not doing any more.

Review goodbunny2

Could be better, especially since its so unrealistic with the books. Also, grammar is terrible.

Story makes no sense.

Also, don't fricking put "RavenPaw" when you can put it as "Ravenpaw"

Check out mine if you're interested though:

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/3agct2hj30gbrces4oqsww/warriors-warrior-cats-swirling-fate-kit-to-leader

Review ThatOneAwkwardSnake

3.5 stars. i would give it a full 4 if it wasn't so unrealistic. i can tell you have just stared reading warriors, because already the writing is a bit bad and sloppy(things happen too fast, bad grammar, plot is also messily put together, etc) but if you work harder and study how to mke better characters and practice writing i'm sure you could make a really awesome and enjoyable game! (tw: sorry if this sounded mean, i'm trying to be as nice as possible and still point out mistakes)
-Snake

Comment goodbunny2

btw please credit me! (in any way)

Comment goodbunny2

Suffix ideas: Dawnfrost, Dawnstreak, Dawnpelt, Dawnstrike, Dawnfury.

Branchpaw - Branchtail, Branchswipe, Branchclaw.

Review waterfall wild

cool, i saw your coments sorry im adding more now

Comment FernStone

Thank you PietroXI, warriorcat, and Phoenix for the reviews :)

Review PietroXI

Nice work. Read fairly smoothly and was mostly free of errors. I appreciated the options provided.

Comment FernStone

Here is the link for part 2
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/rggpt0fyqeinibjhrger0w/warrior-cats-thunderclan-part-2

Comment FernStone

If anybody reads this could you tell me some warrior cat suffixes for DawnPaw and BranchPaw? I'd love the ideas!

Comment FernStone

Thanks for the comment! I changed the link for one of the options but I forgot to do it for the other side of the link if you get what I mean. I made sure to fix it :)

Review Warriorcat_●▪

I love this, but I recommend doing quest for links that always work. And or, use the gamebook version. If that isn't your type, go for squiffy, I don't judge!

Comment Phoenix555

I loved how many options there are to choose from!

Review Phoenix555

I loved all of the choices you put in it so keep up the good work!

Comment FernStone

I give credit to EVERYBODY that reads this and even more credit to the people that help me with it. I give a special thanks to Erin Hunter and everyone that makes these books. I would not be able to make this Fan Fiction without you so if you are someone that helps make these books I hope you read it and tell me how it is!

Comment FernStone

Hi My name is FernStone and I hope you all enjoy! This is my very first FanFiction so If you see any mistakes make sure to comment. Please do not get mean. I will try respond to all of your chats calmly. I have school so if it takes me a while to get to your chats please remember and wait. If you like the story I will make another one but If you do not like it I will start a new one for you. If you have any tips, concerns, questions, or names that I could use in my Fanfiction then Please tell me! Last but not least If I choose to use your idea of names then I WILL credit you the best I can. Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy!