Hometown by flysquirrel775

Comment IFforClassroom

Haven't seen on here in a while. How's it going?

Review Icamenal

Writing is alright, but there are some typos. And after the protagonist left Tetra City, Mr. Orson changed genders. :p

Comment flysquirrel775

Yes, now I'm working on another story about society again. Possibly about crime and gangs.

Comment IFforClassroom

Hi Flysquirrel775. Are you in the process of writing anything else?

Comment flysquirrel775

Yes, thank you for noticing the words in the story, IFforClassroom. That is a message I intended to show in my writing. Also, your secret- code generator machine is really cool as well.

Comment IFforClassroom

To avoid further spoilers: (the key is flysquirrel775)

##### Encrypted: decrypt with http://www.exciting-stories.co.uk/code_generator.htm
ZZZZZ SVQVK JNNAB GHDPF OEKIW SUQOR GEXIL NUKBP UOIAE OXBMX GSQBK
RWKJH IRERC VEXIP NBGWK FMNSR TVXSW KNXXR LCAGF EPUFB TFIRK WUCET
WTAVJ RXTRH EULKE HBXPK PHVSS CSFCO KSFRA JPFKG FBMNH RHRMF MJCLI
EHOTH CMHNH USKKH IHSQS AMMMQ IBSAJ DXKOB PUPPO DWDTK TEJLR PSVSN
CKFSQ DVABN DNOPA BHWMC DPJTC WARUA SDPHL BELRV HOAVJ CMRDR AASAE
VDNHO HUEPD RINIT PEURD NDVCC RAJTA LHIET XECME KEPHE JCNUX AICFX
GBBUP BETGX KXOPH TJFON BOISP DOADN DKQSU AJOQV PSNRI WGHNO EWPBS
OXVBP LBSLW GSTPJ WBXAJ DIIMB MGBAU VBQEG TMPCE SOHHV NNOFW LWBQT
SFHSE HGOVC GILDL ELUVW SFTET TJXRD BLVFC RWJXC LWRXX LMKVW ECOAF
LAVTQ UEHNJ PXAXU XNRSW ODQSP XGSAR OUAST JQWCQ JAMDK DSRXB HCOEA
PLPFL KXRUI GMEXD WJHKO HEFJJ VQCLC CKMJV ECNBW DOEUR VQMCG PDXTM
SRTFF TGBIC KOEES PVOTR NTOMK KCMKM DWCCX JHXFQ VNVNX CRFDG HQAMS
MWMEW KCKQC ATTCB EGPSG MWAEV IHLBL KQEUW PIMHD NHOTE KMTCW KWQGM
FEGVJ TJUNW NEMPC IAMGC QCTRV HAUCX SUAXD SUMEQ SXLQL CHJVW ONEQH
IEWMF BSWLN PCAVR DEOFH MIQXX CPFVW OFHWN CPKDV SLHSM PJJLE MKGJP
VUMEW VQNOJ ORQPU JMBEJ SXGRE WNMHO FMVFL TEWTJ GHTIB WGUPG HPIME
SWGMB SGUJT WCMRT ACCSX SMBBA INCDG GWVGO BLXGC AAKXT WKKJW OJJJQ
EHWMU WRBFB AQVBC VBPPF CONCU GBQQN VTIKG NEOEL GPPKO JGQMG NFERX
XTRXE HPAUI OLDBQ TGDXH HVMDA LHXJM JWBPR KVFUK ENLMJ CIODF KOQNV
IDMJF SPUJB ONFUP OCJQW RSTTN JJXBP HOFTE DQMAU NULRG AOQWP IQACT
JNCNQ SKDMF DHPXB XVIMQ JLAAV KVSRS ADVJE LDKNU PVSCI NCRNL HEBMC
WMJQD GVVMU VIGVJ VLVOL HPINB DGFRR COLJR WHFWS LNGLV PWGAB PSNAK
CRTGH KWDOQ KQFPO JJRCM IECMK DCNSD WBINI PUVAP GNOCJ SSCER GDDNI
AEFBM PTHDP EUOAQ IBGEQ YYYYY
##### End encrypted message

Comment IFforClassroom

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I like the addition of the free-verse intro with sonnet-like qualities.

Review IFforClassroom

Excellent writing! This is only the third non-game IF I've ever really enjoyed. (Photopia and My Father's Long Long Legs are the other two).

Review Bounce Bounce

Dang, this is so sad man. So sad....

Comment flysquirrel775

This is more of a story than a game, so yeah.

Review Razbliuto

This is not usually my type of game, but it looks like you put a lot work into this. It was a great story. (I'm trying to keep this spoiler-free)