This game could have potential. It’s sad how all the pathways end at the same thing though. Diversity is very important in making a good game. You did add more context and a different way before Rainkit becomes an apprentice, but that is all. You did make a good storyline though, even if it is not an original place, and even though it isn’t a more significant story, you made it reasonable.
You ended the game on an abrupt note. You could atleast add a note telling the player that the game is finished and will not be added to, or you could make it smooth into an ending easier. I also saw some spelling errors.
This could have been a great game, you just needed to put some more effort into it.