Draygun and the Presence: Chapter One by Philipsmith

My first twine game.

You wake up after a strange nightmare quickly brushing it off and continuing your village life.

You have more important things to do, namely getting ready for the journey to the capital city with your two best friends.

Has RPG elements like race choice, skills and attributes being used in choices and influencing consequences.

Some of which will span through the next chapters.
Review by Rogrim
18 Sep 2017
Reminds me of my first dnd rouge
Good story
(5)

Review by Madcap
26 May 2017
Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.
(5)

Review by Icamenal
02 Apr 2016
I feel like the grammatical errors (like the lack of commas) detract from the story, and in my opinion, the plotline is just alright. Gameplay wise, I like the professional feel that I haven't seen in some of the other games on this site. The characterization is also good. Hoping for the next chapter, looking forward to see what happens with the skills and attributes.
(3)

Review by myusername
28 Jan 2016
Will be waiting for the next chapter
(4)

Review by william oost
16 Jan 2016
One word
AMAZING its like a normal role playing game but cooler
(5)

Review by schertec
13 Nov 2015
Awesome. Please finish this. I would like to see more dialogue options. Like when Draygun and others are talking I'd like to have that reflect how the story goes or how characters perceive me. But seriously cool.
(5)

Review by slarstorm
03 Oct 2015
I can't wait for the next chapter, this was great.
(5)

Review by Chaos
03 Oct 2015
It was great.
(5)

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Average rating
(4.62)
Written by
Philipsmith

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HTML Game
Published 14 Jun 2014
Updated 14 Jun 2014

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