I don't think I'm serious, I'm pretty proud of my first game, but if I were you, I'd be pretty NOT proud of this game. Terrible game, all you do is go to places.
Grammar - 0 out of 10.
Vocabulary - 0 out of 10.
Did I mention that the introduction was very rude? Do not continue this game.
The concept of the game is great. The breaking point here is your grammar, which was horrendously terrible.
I like the concept of the game, if only it was written better.