Simple, easy to follow. Title might not be the best descriptor, grammar needs a little work; consider getting a proofreader. That's not being antagonistic, it's constructive criticism. (Ex. FBI Agent making pills at home? Sounds more like a narcotics producer. Like Breaking Bad.) Also, personal favourite is route 1, 2, 2.
Built alright, provides a desire to try again when you fail. That said, the (spoilers) inability to win no matter what is somewhat disappointing. Also, "you're" not "your". Other than that grammar is fairly decent.
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