Ok to start off, the game has a nice look to it but the lack of variety in endings is kinda sad. Especially since its a quest game. Also, if your going to have a game with just 1 ending, then make a game with a good and convincing story that will feed the reader throughout.
O.O player has attribute = difficulty spelling.
I "thing" @gameSoul missed a few, maybe it's my "inmagination"
the lack of a good ending is also worrying, The angel of death lurks round every corner. I would have loved to have checked the cupboard for a weapon like a metal baseball bat before pushing it in front of the door.
Built alright, provides a desire to try again when you fail. That said, the (spoilers) inability to win no matter what is somewhat disappointing. Also, "you're" not "your". Other than that grammar is fairly decent.