Great fun! It held my interest all the way through - unheard of, especially as reading the white-on-black really messed with my eyes.
I'm clearly not cut out to be a private investigator, thought I'd spotted the killer and felt I was being so clever, and was wrong. :D Can't bring myself to replay now that I know. That's probably the thing wrong with this, that actually matters.
There are lots of spelling mistakes and things that look like "note to self" which shouldn't have been visible to the reader/player. But they didn't spoil it for me. Good writing, great sense of place and the characters didn't get muddled in my mind. I'd read a novel or story/ies by Tia Orisney, and I will go and find her other games that reviewers mention. Thanks for this one!
Really good story! I give only 3 stars because it's a twine thing, wasn't made in quest and most importantly it's not a game, just a really long story with some options that are not real choices, it takes you to the same place with exception of the end. Also, some misspelling, than for then.