Very amusing with a particularly funny ending! I love the illustrations and my only criticism would be to extend it but understand this will take time, especially if you are illustrating each scene. Maybe consider a sequel instead?
It's actually pretty funny how dramatized Rosie makes the mundane task she's given. Her crazy perspective on everything makes for a fun read, and it's fun how each decision leads to a different ending. I would have given it 5-stars if there were a bit more to it, but this is a good, solid, quick game.