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It could be better if it wasn't for the "your choice yielded nothing" options, and then when I try to not be a douchebag to the guy with the truck, I die.I felt like i was being guided rather than offered a game.
I get that this caters to freaking out OCD people, but this is a story not an adventure and most of the time there is only one thing to click.
Super fun, and challenging. Good job!
Pretty good story! I wish I'd had more info about the shortcut though, so I could make a more educated decision.
The directions were slightly disorienting, but I loved the random attacks, and the desperate plea to the goddess option. I am a millionaire. Great job! Good luck with working on your English. It wasn't too bad. :) <3
It was pretty good but didn't know how to get to my destination, some of the words were misspelled, and some of the spots had directions to go but I wasn't told what directions were available and had to guess.
Not a bad start. But hopefully the next game will be longer than 2 rooms. :P
FFS, can't play it because I don't speak foreign languages. Dangit.
There is no game here, just a story. It's an interesting story. But it's not a game.
Hmmm should I tell the game to fail me, or not to fail me? What kind of options are those? Also you need someone to check your grammar, wording, and spelling.
Bad spelling, nasty tricks, and you start the adventure in the hotseat with nothing to defend yourself. I suppose it's an ok game but I'm not finding it that great.
I'm sure it's a good game, but I can't play it because I don't speak French.
Great game. Very challenging. I look forward to a much longer one in the future. Loved the endings by the way. :)
So I walk through, cause a ton of havoc, find my friend and get arrested.
That was well written but the pathlines were meh.
So I can turn a lamp on and off, take a book, and look at a table. I can't leave the room, read the book, or do much at all.
Lots of things with names I don't understand, which give me no description when I examine them. Lots of things to take and didn't find a way to use them. Lots of rooms to explore and not much to do in any of them. So i go sleep, and then I find nothing and go out and suddenly I have no buttons anymore.
1. Very confusing.
2. Not much clarification.
3. Broken pathways.
4. No way to move on...
"The old guy ends up taking off, leaving behind several buckets of water in the back of a scrapped waggon. You could either [take the buckets of water] or [leave them behind], but that means no water for a while. ((This page is still unfinished))"
Well that was exciting... or not.
I'm slightly confused as to how one can play these stories as an adventure...
That was seeming fun til I went to the deck door and had no more buttons to click. This was following the incident with the bridge and then trying to return...
So I lost because of a battle where I click attack or defend until I win or lose. Meh. I did better when I had a choice in my fate.
This was very good! The chests are tricky. I'm looking forward to more adventures by you.
Yup. I was late after curfew alright. The parent was cool with it. That was all of 15 seconds of my life. See if you can make longer adventures. :P
It wasn't too bad. Looking forward to more.
I personally found it terribly uninteresting. But that's just me.
It was relatively interesting. I disliked being insulted thoroughly at the end because my decision proved to be the wrong one.
Sorry mate. I didn't have a lot of ability to prevent my death. When the choices for attack are "A" or "B" it's impossible to know what the best choice is. Also don't forget to run a spell-check before you publish.
I could never find out how to do anything but drink. I got bored. I quit.
It was pretty neat, but it was very short.
It was cool but I couldn't kill the orc so I went a different way, and ended up facing a dragon which I didn't know how to kill. He pwned me.
Bad writing, 2 choice scenario, and so short it wasn't even entertaining.
The 2 choice scenario was kinda boring, but the worst part was when the kid finally leaves the home and I choose cash so i can buy what I need and it starts over. I really don't want to start at teh very beginning every time I make the wrong choice.
That moment you die because you were not informed that continuing to run would result in your clumsiness then without any choice you drown in rain. Lame.
I pretty much just had to follow the story throughout most of it. There wasn't a whole lot of freedom for action.
Seems like a good game to start, but I left the house without the note, and couldn't get back in to get it to "remind me" of why I was outside.
I got to the 3rd part. It was very good!
It was pretty awesome but there were only a few choices, and the story was very short.I was waiting for her to be kidnapped or something.
Great story! I want this story in a book that I can read now and again. Super intense!
I really expected more than one trip out to the store. Like really? We get stood up and game over? So anticlimactic.
Sorry lol. I couldn't play it. The black letters on red background was hurting me eyes.
Weird and creepy. It was well written but I expected more to it.
Wow. Don't click the links, they take you to other sites. Pfft, that's the best way to make me hate a game.
I really wish it had options and choices instead of just, "Here's my story, click some buttons."
kinda bummed that this was only a teaser with no further game anywhere, but it has great potential.
Very good game! Took a lot of intuition to survive, and I failed, at the end, for "falling for" the nice girl. XD
It was a lot of explaining about someone who OD-ed. Not a game, just a little story.
I kept trying but there was 3 paragraphs of waking up sick, and no buttons.
Very fun, if a bit disorienting. I think you should create a better mapping system though, I got a bit lost.
So, there are no room descriptions, simplistic choices to make, no plot, no story, just.... hunt the wumpus in rooms that you have to enter to know what the rooms are. Mehhhhhh......
This game could be more fun if:
1. It had better grammar and spelling.
2. It had a wider range of choices effecting outcome.
3. I could have a choice to not do stupid things like talk out loud when I'm trying to be stealthy. That situation with the soldier could so have been avoided if the person I was playing had just kept his thoughts inward.
Also the chick drops her gun. Really? Someone who's been part of the hunting squad for a long time would not have casually dropped her gun.
It could have good potential but I can't even tell if I completed the puzzle. I kept trying to say a word but apparently you can't just speak a word. Typing the word didn't work. It's a difficult puzzle, with no walkthrough, and a lot of unhelped confused people. I'd be glad to play the game once you start helping people have a chance to get past the first gate.
Very short but it has good potential.
There were a lot of puzzles completed that I didn't get to try to figure out, and there wasn't a lot of room for imagination.
The storyline was good but i couldn't work out many of the pieces I needed to continue. I never got an invitation, I couldn't cut anything, for cat guts and for mattress straw. I couldn't get socks. I couldn't find the mask. There really should be a link to the walkthrough. I finally just gave up because I simply couldn't figure out how to proceed.
I wander around for awhile and then finally am done wandering. Then I literally had 15 seconds of game-play and it was over. *sigh* was hoping for longer than a total of 3 minutes of game.
This was a super fun game, and thanks to how much I enjoyed it, I decided to play more games on the site offered to me. Well done! ^.^
Next up: Moreau kitten. :P
Too many blocked areas and I wasn't allowed to take anything. I felt very confined playing this game. I finally ran out of ideas.
It was really interesting... but way too short.
I got bored with the game pretty fast. It's probably very interesting for some people, but not for me as much. Sorry for the boo rating.