N7 [Under A New Management] by awsomethingy

To Dercas: The reason I am unable to use "Yore" correctly is because that isn't a word. Society today. Unless, of course, you are reffering to the medieval age word "Yord" which meant 'in the times before.'

I bet you all thought I was dead, not yet. Ah yes, "Battle at the Leeway", the ghost mission that was promised to have insane amount of choices and freedom that never happened. Well I'm back, and there's going to be some changes. Number one is simple, this game is taking a much more mature stance. You can't write good dialogue when you're appeasing all ages. Number two is that grammar errors are likely not to be fixed, as I do not have the time to sift through 1100 pages. The Super Update is coming, yes. It will have the Battle at the Leeway and it will have eighty different endings with nineteen paths that share no overlap with each other. Grammar errors are bound to happen, that's simply what comes from writing as much as this game requires. This mission contains six hundred pages and it is half way done. Characters will die or live based on your choices, but more importantly is this: there are so many ways it is insane.

Frequently Posted Comments

Your humor sucks: Well you don't have to worry about humor anymore, you don't like it you won't get it.

Male Asari aren't a thing: I never thought they were, in a few pages of the three hundred that the Asari spy encounter is in; it has male instead of female. Mistakes were made, I simply typed it wrong.

Your dialogue is immersion breaking: Fixing that too. Again I was catering to all audiences. Apparently all the critics are from one specific audience, the mature one, so now you will get a mature game.

Update: Battle at the Leeway
Progress- 50%
Summary of Update: A Cerberus transport ship called the "Leeway" is transporting a Black Box. This digital box has information imprinted onto it of an imminent Cerberus attack. Raid the ship with a section of the Alliance Fleet that recently retreated from the Reaper invasion on Earth, and retrieve the black box. However, the information on it may be too costly, and you may find yourself betraying your team to ensure what is uncovered stays uncovered. This update also includes the next sleep mission. This will have more custom paths than Escape the Flagship 2 has endings.

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Review by Zymandis
12 Oct 2016
I really enjoyed this game !
Is there any chance for the update this year?
(5)

Review by StuffMcScruff
26 Jun 2016
Yea there could have be some improvements but I enjoyed it, laughed and nearly died with the random occurrences.
(5)

Review by Icamenal
02 Apr 2016
The writing could have been better, but this game picked up speed nicely.
(4)

Review by Leinad Why
15 Oct 2015
"Sticks and stones may.." what? cumon man who says that? the dialogue really needs to be tweaked a huge bit. I guess it will get more mature as you grow older but i can tell you put effort into this... my advice is to read more books (I know crazy right?) or talk to and older group of people. If you do lots of this your writing will seem more natural. I know this belongs in the comment section but unlike other critics I like to give constructive critism so you can improve. This has great potential idk if you copied or wat but keep at it.
nice hair tho. (refering to the Trudeau bashing ads in Canada and the fact that this does have a nice cover.)
(3)

Review by Soup3rMan
28 Sep 2015
I can see you've put plenty of work into this, however it breaks the immersion when you add crude childish humor.
(4)

Review by MisterPibb316
04 May 2015
A still-in-the-works, CYOA-style fanfic of a popular video game series. Hm.
(2)

Review by -XYAB-
13 Mar 2015
The game has you remember your past choices way too often, but it captures the feeling of ME quite well. Though some dialogue and encounters feel rushed or silly.
(3)

Review by pcwriter
19 Feb 2015
Keep updating, great game!
(5)

Review by Allucario
12 Feb 2015
Awesome game, keep up the good work.
Love it!
(5)

Review by arislaf
05 Feb 2015
I loved it. Nice experience.
(5)

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Written for Quest 5.5
Published 21 Jul 2014
Updated 06 Feb 2016

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