Lost Dog by Claire6129

Review by ajryan318

the dog was so cute at the end of the story. but dont let the cats eat you

Review by CreateAnAccount

This was waaaaay too easy m8. 1725...

Review by Nutjitzu

Awwww! Adorable!^-^
I love puppies! Great job!

Review by CraftyKat

Some misspelled words, a very adorable puppy. It's fun and mildly entertaining. Better than some...

Review by Marzipan

This had a plot and some descriptive writing so that alone makes it better than a good percentage of the gamebooks on this site. But the pictures could have lined up with the text better, and you've got some misspelled words sprinkled around though (repeated uses of 'riffle' being the most glaring). And look, I'm sorry, but I think I'm just going to have a policy from now on of just automatically trimming a star of hyperlink games that kill you over and over and don't at least provide a 'go back' link.

That said, I don't want to discourage you, so I let me emphasize again that the writing was pretty decent, I felt bad for that poor puppy having so many horrible things happen to him!

I see you have a lot of games, I'll try and check out another later.

Review by honestly

I loved the idea! Very creative!

Review by Tom C.L.

A great idea. I was eaten by rats.

Review by AxeEcliptica

It's cute, however picture placement is kind of annoying and takes away from the experience. It's cute though, like a children's book.

Review by NoGoodNamesLeft

Haha, this is great.

Review by Paper Asssassin

Great Game! Love the theme, and cute story too.