There is definitely a lot of room for improvement, but for what it is it is fine.
That was amazing. Surreal and dark at every moment, one of the few gamebooks that make me ponder on the exact meaning of the story. Great writing too.
Even if I wouldn't consider this an interactive story, it was still very good. The drawings were great, the music was fitting, the writing wasn't perferct put it did the job and the whole thing was fun to read.
This was a waste of time. It has no context whatsoever, and the whole thing is repetitive and awfully written. I would rate it 0 stars if I could. It is even more appalling than the original.
You are stuck in a room with nothing in it and you can´t move. That is the whole game.
Why did you publish this? It is not really a text adventure, as there is nothing to do. I know you published it as a joke, but it is not particulary funny. I hope you make another text adventure or gamebook and you improve on this.
That game was really good. I would like to find out more about the story, so please make a sequel!
A really good game. I played it various times and it was always enjoyable
I like really hard and unfair games, in wich you die all the time (That is why the game I made is so difficult). I really liked this one.
A great idea. I was eaten by rats.
It was amazing, but please fix the error!
A great test. I only failed the sea otters question.
I liked switching between the villain and the other person. I got the "It is good to be bad" ending.
This game is really underrated. A great gamebook
I really liked it. Could I use the dice sistem in one of my games?
It was the best gamebook I have ever played. Absolutely wonderful.
I love short gamebooks, and this one was one of the best.
Really dull, terrible story and pointless. It is mildly entertaining sometimes but it is mediocre.
The game was good and my name is Tom, so that was very funny
It has a map. I love text adventures with maps.
That was really funny and original. One of the best gamebooks on this website. Please make the sequel soon!
It was funny, but it would be better if you could win
Really funny, but it was way to short
This is the best trilogy of all time!
It is similar to Power, a game I made: In both you constantly die!
Funny, bizarre, quirky... This game is fantastic.
I hate justin bieber, but posting this makes him much more popular, and people who hate it talk about him more than people who like him. Like I said, I think his music is bad, and that he is stupid, but this is just unnecessary and reduces the quality of this site.
I enjoy short gamebooks like this. I absolutely loved it.
A video to give propaganda to a youtube channel? Ridiculous
Terrible, not fun, stupid, ridiculous and bad
A really good gamebook. Absolutely fantastic.
A great ending, but sometimes it was lightly confusing.
A great and difficult game wich has good endings. I hope it could be longer.
Really bizarre and funny, I liked it.
Really funny! Original and difficult.
Really original and funny. It is completely insane, wich makes it great.
I was loving the game and then... It ended. Please finish this, It was amazing.
This game is awful. Bad grammar, stupid story... It is a complete and utter disaster of a game.
The game itself was great, but the comments really killed the mood
A great concept, but it needs to be much longer.