A Kitten's Life... by noam15A

Review by Maya_moo

I really like this game because you got to choose what happens but it doesn't have any pictures which I don't really like; but otherwise it's good

Review by Heres a problem

It was short, can u make a prt 2 plsss!

Review by Catmom

Hey, that's pretty cool, especially for a first ever interactive text adventure story!
One can see you really like cats and kittens. I think this short story will works best for kids and kid at heart !

Keep up the good work ! Waiting to see what else you'll cook up as you gather experience.

Review by Leotard50

This is actually a children's story about a cute cat. As such it is cute and funny and fun to read with a younger reader!! The story line, aimed at younger ones is simplified but does offer choices and various paths for the plot to flow in - again - would say this is great for little readers and beginners in this genre.

Review by WarriorCatsTextAdventureMaker191

It's pretty poor, sorry. The story's WAY too short, and the path doesn't really change (Accept for one ending where the girl thinks your a weirdo), and that isn't even realistic because of 'Dating'. You should really make it more realistic, or make it a fantasy one that's actually WELL MADE and has different endings. This isn't enough to call it a game, you gotta stretch it out a bit, and make like different lovers and not 2 endings. If this was like a preview/WIP of a gamebook, it'd be fine, but this is not enough to call it a real gamebook. Plus, you can't really get in a relationship with your brothers, their just there so that you can tell the girl about them. The only one you can actually get into some relationship into is that girl. The adoption thing is pointless, it still leads to the same thing no matter what you do. Plus, when you do the adoption thing, you catch prey... Aren't you a house cat that isn't allowed outside? And why don't your humans name you're kit? Their your owners, after all, plus the kitten's owner. Oh, wait a second. You suddenly turn into a wild cat once you get a girlfriend *Complete logic*
So, if you don't wanna read it all, here's the summary.

There isn't enough storyline, there's only 2 endings, the adoption thing is pointless, and this text adventure sucks. Bye.