Murder in the Woods by Arghya

Review Awesomemonkeyboy

I wish that the not from the author was not there and it was really short

Review GameofChocolate

A few notes for editing: Cars have TIRES not TYRES, and things took a turn for the WORSE not WORST.

Also kind of annoyed at the part where the story was brought up to a peak of distress and suspense, and then interrupted by a note from the author.

But the part that I was able to play was fairly good..

Comment LunaMoon35

I CANT DO ANYTHING!

Comment snazzy ray

The grammar errors are too painful to me, and I was unable to finish the whole thing. I like the plot, and if you fix the errors, I will gladly finish the game.

Comment Arghya

Sorry about that. I know all the basics of gramatical usage and punctuation but was in a hurry to type out and my 'auto Caps I ' feature was turned off initially, which I noticed later unfortunately. Hence the unforseen error. Thanks for the suggestion but its impossible to go line by line now and rectify the whole thing. Will take care next time😅Just hope the readers enjoyed the plot.😁

Comment paravantis

The personal pronoun, "I", even in the middle of a sentence, should be capitalized. You may want to correct this everywhere.