Robbed!! A text based adventure minigame. by ev1246

What would YOU do if you were robbed? Would you hide, or grab the nearest weapon and attack? And would you risk your life to save your family's valuables?

Try my other game too! (It's much longer) http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/rj2w5l1h3eotnrg2f42txa/rescue
Review by Chorne
30 Nov 2017
Nice job! This was an enjoyable, if quite short story.
You did a nice job with dialogue, but some of the descriptions of characters talking are slightly redundant. 'screams Rob,' for instance. It's used twice in a very short amount of time. Try using a different verb to mix it up, like 'Rob gasped' or etc. That's my only little nitpick.
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Published 16 Nov 2017
Updated 24 Jan 2018

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