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This is exceptionally short, and the player is forced into the situations they may not want. Choices also include things that the player shouldn't be able to control. And there is only one possible winning scenario.
I completely agree with @WarriorCatsTextAdventureMaker191 - this text adventure was boring, bland, and at the absolute most, mediocre. The descriptiveness of the writing is appallingly boring, and I wished this within 2 minutes, through ALL playthroughs.
I do not wish to be harsh, but this is probably on the bad side of all of the WC Dating Simulators I have ever played... Which is quite a bit. Sorry! It's definitely unfinished, so please work on it more, and then I can judge it furthermore.
You can hardly control your character. It seems your a god and you can make one cat mean or nice. Then you can change the settings into a new scene.
It isn't friendly to the player, and you get led into things that you don't want. Like for instance, I decided to be mean, and then Hawkfrost told me how much he loved me, and then wanted to be my mate. I wouldn't like someone who liked mean people. They're weird. But oh no, since you were mean you MUST be his mate.
It's much too short. A good text adventure takes place inside a dimension where there is no canon cats, and the clans never end, and always come back after disasters. There is fan-made or the real clans in these, each of them are appealing although. Then the player is welcomed to a new world, unknown to what to come.
It hits on them that a guy/gal is appealing after awhile, which builds relationships. Meanwhile, this just makes people go like 'I'd love to have _______ as a mate! I'm gonna play this and try being his mate!' Boring, right?
So if you make another dimension, people are much more interested in taking some time into the cats, and slowly crack open the egg of their personality. Meanwhile in this, you know them, and also you can't control who you want to be your mate anyway! So the whole concept of 'Dating' is stupid!
This is by far the worst Warriors dating simulator I've seen so far. It's not appealing to others to see the same characters, same personalities, etc. It's uncontrollable and short too.