An immersive story of a British soldier in the first World War. I don't usually care for the CYOAs on this site, but now I only wish more of them were like this. The choices you make feel real and have believable consequences, and there's a twist about halfway through that had me facepalming (in a good way!), that I don't even to spoil for others by even hinting at here.
Not quite a five unfortunately because there are lots of punctuation errors sprinkled throughout. And I feel like you did yourself a disservice with the blurb, it could have been a bit more descriptive to hook readers, and you shouldn't call it 'short' when it's the perfect length for the story and there are plenty of 'games' on this site that are over in two clicks.
Stunning! I love this concept and you pulled it off excellently. I was really thinking about my decisions and how they would change the outcome of my character. It really sucked me in and I really felt the emotion of the game.
Excellent writing, concept, and game! I would have loved to see the game continue farther.
Oh, you might want to check your quotations, they were off a few times. Other than that, great game! :)