Incredible game! I have no idea how you make these, but this game is outstanding! Deserves the #1 spot of RPG without a doubt!
This is the first game that isn't a CYOA that I spent more than half an hour on! Normally I never know what to do and I give up because I can't get the syntax right on anything.
Your game had a very logical sequence and it was a lot of fun! Great writing, concept, and pictures. Those are easily the best MS Paint pictures I have ever seen. Again, fantastic job!
I did get stuck eventually though (I'm a complete amateur :P). See my comment on where.
Spectacular game! I can tell a lot of work went into this! The characters were awesome and I loved how it kept track of your relationships and such (though it was slightly inaccurate). I really liked the way the story was developed and I really felt that the choices affected the outcome of the game.
The only time I was annoyed was when you can choose how to leave as the two bad guys were fighting. I chose to walk out, but I got forced into doing what DC suggested. Oh well, other than that, the game was flawless! I like this even more than Victorian Detective! Incredible work!
Stunning! I love this concept and you pulled it off excellently. I was really thinking about my decisions and how they would change the outcome of my character. It really sucked me in and I really felt the emotion of the game.
Excellent writing, concept, and game! I would have loved to see the game continue farther.
Oh, you might want to check your quotations, they were off a few times. Other than that, great game! :)
Awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed the game! I'm leaving a review because you asked me to :)
First of all, the writing was great! I thought that the interactions between characters was very real and down to earth. I like the action too.
The choices were a little bit limited at times, but as a Gamebook writing myself, I can understand how that happens. I would love to see one with a lot more options than the one you have here.
Still, the lack of choices wasn't enough to take it down from the rating I had in mind. I'll probably be playing part 2 soon! Feel free to check out my game too :)
I'm intrigued! It is a bit dark, but I think that was what you were going for. If so, you did a great job. The font and colors add a lot, and the pictures are a helpful bonus. It was a bit short, but it was good!
Okay, much better than the last one about stars. I'm not sure what the deal is with the star games, but this one is way better. Though the objective was simple and so was the story, at least there was one. Nice and informative, but honestly not that fun. Still, not too bad.
As interesting as these facts are, this isn't actually a game. There is no story, play-ability, or objective. Sorry, but I can't give this a good rating.
Fantastic game! It has so much potential! If it was complete I would give it it 5/5.
That was extremely short. I think you should take your time with the next one, and make it longer. That's what I'm doing :)
Actually a lot better than I thought it would be. I found myself playing the game over and over, simply because I really really wanted to help the character (my?) brother. I don't know how, but you made me care about what happens. It's weird, but you've done a good job! The only thing you should be aware of is that you have a few random loops, and the choices were confusing because of the hyperlinks.
Alright. So, I'm not an expert on these games (I'm more of a Gamebook type of guy), but I think that I know enough to say some. I did appreciate the prompts a little bit, since I'm really bad at these type of games, but you took it too far. I am a noob, but I didn't need that much help. Also, in the beginning, you told me to grab a dagger before I left. Well, maybe if you could actually put the dagger on the table or even in a chest. There was no way for the player to know how to grab the knife.
That said, this is probably still better than I could do.
I'm really impressed with the mechanics, but that's probably because I'm new to this whole thing. Tic-tac-toe can only be so fun, that's why I'm giving you a 4/5.
It was actually quite good until it ended abruptly. Even when I agreed to do it, it said I lost. When I said no, I lost. Was there even a way to beat the game?
Great game! I felt like I had a lot of options and I thoroughly enjoyed them. It did feel at times like no matter what I did, something would still happen. Either way, great game. My only complaint is that I would like to see more choices in between reading. Sometimes in felt basically like a book I was reading.
Awesome! This is actually the first text based game that wasn't in the CYOA format that I actually really enjoyed. Not to mention that it's in Tolkien's world :)
Well written, clever, and pretty much altogether brilliant! I know that this is a really good game because I'm bad at it and I still enjoy it! :)
Favorite game yet! Found this website a few days ago, and I really like it! This game has been my favorite so far! I love the different paths and how the game is fun but still challenging :) Keep it up! Looking forward to the next part :)
Pretty average. I had to restart a few times, but not too hard. Obviously the game wasn't too in depth, but it wasn't bad for your first game!
Not quite as good as eat cow or die, but I still thoroughly enjoyed this one as well! I never even tried to press the cobblestone button. I was really close to, though! :P
YES! First 5 star I have given yet! The game was both creative, funny, and clever. I loved that there were multiple ways to do it and that it wasn't too difficult! Keep up the good work, I loved the game!
It was really interesting and surprisingly funny! I would have liked to have seen more branches for the story though. It seem kind of railroaded. Still though, awesome game!
Probably your first game. It was amusing though :)
Loved the game! The only issues I saw were some grammar and spelling issues as well as some obvious plot devices. Still though, I was totally enveloped in the game and I can't wait for the next one!