Warrior Cats by Creeper_Archer109

Comment Venomclaw

I loved it!! pls make another!!

Comment Venomclaw

Please make another!!!! Loved it!!

Review kalideo_kat_:3_

this was good but short, and maybe a little more story with the kits,

Review goodbunny2

I think its pretty good but I agree, you could add more choices and more story to it. You could also give us a choice to live our/her life. Like maybe more toms to choose from or deputy/leader or maybe a loner. But I think it's great overall and at least it's finished. By the way, I'm making one of my own, its called warrior cats swirling fate. I don't think you can find it just by searching sense it is
WIP but, here is a link :) tell me what you think please and thanks.

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/3agct2hj30gbrces4oqsww/warriors-warrior-cats-swirling-fate-kit-to-leader

Review SmallPixelBoat

It was fun-
But I would have liked a few more choices to give Violet a bit more personality :)

Comment SmallPixelBoat

"This is going to be fun :D!" -Me, before dieing to a badger.
"hOlY sHeET-" -Me after dieing to the badger

Comment WarriorCatz

I want to say who noticed how the cat has two favorite? Over all pretty nice.

Review STORMalsoTHELIONGUARDGIRL1209

PART 2 PLZ!!!!you did great!

Comment Mike1503(MikeForShort)

You should play this game... That's all!

Review Mike1503(MikeForShort)

Well, if there is a part #2, I'm playing that!
This is great! Part 2 wanted!

Review Detective

super short, I didn't really like how it started off as darkfeather liking "you". I would like to get to know who he is, in case others haven't read warrior cats.

Comment Wild warrior paws

OMG, that was amazing that was probably like the best story I’ve heard yet and you have some good names for the Warriors, there’s lots of action and best of all you even said how the cat died!

Comment Peach

I mean it was ok, but I kept dying at lot's of parts. And the deaths weren't that realistic. Maybe three stars.

Review warri0rcats

I loved it and it had a peaceful ending that I really liked.

Comment itamarushi

a great game about a great book seires. four stars

Review scarly woods

I think its pretty good but I agree, you could add more choices and more story to it. You could also give us a choice to live our/her life. Like maybe more toms to choose from or deputy/leader or maybe a loner. But I think it's great overall and at least it's finished. By the way, I'm making one of my own, its called warrior cats moon ray clan. I don't think you can find it just by searching sense it is a work in progress but, here is a link :) tell me what you think please and thanks. http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan

Review Warrioroftherainbow

When I first started to play it I said `yay at least a good game in this page!` but then on the fight with the badgers I decided to finish with my badger first and... well... at least you could do my death more realistic, please. I chosed the other ending (help Darkfeather) and that ending was OK until I realized that the badger I was fighting with just vanished in the air. Later, when I got to a walk with Darkfeather I told him `no, I dont want to be your mate` and I drowned. If I said yes, the ending was still boring. If you could update the endings a bit or do it more long I would give it a bigger rating.

Review The_Lion's_Den

It's a pretty good game, I would just like to suggest somethings.
1. Make more different and unique endings. The only real endings are to be with Darkfeather or die.
2. If the character is going to die, you should make it more realistic. In one end you are surprised by a badger and killed. Yet why would this badger kill you if you were able to fight two badgers near the nursery? In the next ending, you are with Darkfeather and he asks you to be his mate. If you say no, he leaves and you drown. There is no way a wave big enough to sweep a full-grown cat away would develop THAT quickly.
3. You also fail to follow the Chekhov's Gun principle and while not necessary, it helps your story to follow it. If you don't know, Chekhov's Gun means if something(like a gun) Is introduced into the plot, that thing has to be used in some way. (like said gun getting used in the next chapter).. You make it seem like Gingerpelt and Rainspeckle are going to be a problem by having Violetflame feel dread with them being there. Then, these two are never heard from again. You set up a problem with no payoff.
4. After the celebrate with your clan option, the paragraphs get really short. The paragraphs sound better when they are longer.

Overall an ok game, and you don't have to listen to any of this. I'm just trying to help.

Review ToxicThoughts666

Good job, great game

Review WarriorCatsTextAdventureMaker191

I don't give a FRICK about Darkfeather. But oh no, you HAVE TO be mates with him. Atleast make multiple toms to be with, y'know! There's no other way to go than 'be mates with darkfeather' and it makes the game really shallow and mediocre. It's also not interesting at all. I'm sorry, but this game needs to just be restarted completely. It's like a fake cake; It looks nice, but when you bite into it it's horrible.

Review Krystallix3

This game is good. It was fairly short though, and everything went by very fast. There was only one major event, and then the rest of the event so were only small pieces about Violetflame’s life. You forgot to expand further on the elder bush fight, it ends blankly without having an end like the nursery fight pathways.
The game description is very short. You could add things to it, such as some of Violetflame’s family and friends, some context, or foreshadowing for what is going to happen in the game.
The good ending is very abrupt. It isn’t where there is plain no end like some games, but it just speeds by. I hope this feedback helps for both users and you, Creeper Archer.

Comment auro5620

i like the game and all,but you should make a bit longer because i finished it in,a minute.But i still like it because i love warrior cats.

Comment Bravenwolf

I liked it,but as others said its a bit everywhere and the writing is choppy but it also has alot of potential and it would great for another one to be made aswell as there being more options but other than that this was an amazing thing to play and i liked the plot to even if it was everywhere but keep up the good work i feel like games like this will get really populer really fast and sorry if i was to harsh

Review pollygussie

Its Amazing!

Review noam15A

Amazing story! I'd love to see a sequel!

Review arashinome

This definitely contains some potential, and whilst some parts seemed random, and jumbled,I enjoyed it overall!

Review Moonwatcher 2.0

Pretty good! However, the writing was a little choppy and it was a mite short.

Review Livvylubug

its so SAD

Comment Dragonqf

This is pretty good! I just don't like how your character dies whenever she rejects Darkfeather's feelings; as if StarClan themselves need them to be together, but that can't be right.
There should be time to acknowledge how deeply you hurt him, then end with a death or something like "...you always regretted your decision. You know you and Darkfeather would've been happy together."

Review archerqueen08

It's on the right track but the writing was a bit choppy and some parts just appeared out of the blue.

Review Kitty-Chan

You need to make more warrior cat games. :)

Comment Lilystar

MAKE NUMBER 2