I don't give a FRICK about Darkfeather. But oh no, you HAVE TO be mates with him. Atleast make multiple toms to be with, y'know! There's no other way to go than 'be mates with darkfeather' and it makes the game really shallow and mediocre. It's also not interesting at all. I'm sorry, but this game needs to just be restarted completely. It's like a fake cake; It looks nice, but when you bite into it it's horrible.
This game is good. It was fairly short though, and everything went by very fast. There was only one major event, and then the rest of the event so were only small pieces about Violetflame’s life. You forgot to expand further on the elder bush fight, it ends blankly without having an end like the nursery fight pathways.
The game description is very short. You could add things to it, such as some of Violetflame’s family and friends, some context, or foreshadowing for what is going to happen in the game.
The good ending is very abrupt. It isn’t where there is plain no end like some games, but it just speeds by. I hope this feedback helps for both users and you, Creeper Archer.