The Seer... by SteveByDefaul

A man is hiking and sees a figure in the distance. Find who or what the creature is and destroy it before it kills you...

This is my first gamebook! Don't be too harsh!
Review Hormus
20 Jul 2018
I loved this game. However.....

-The red-font/black-BG along with the weird fonts made it really hard to read
-I was hoping I could choose which gun I could buy
-It was a bit on the short side

Otherwise good!

-Hormus

Comment superwholock37
04 Dec 2013
Sorry have to mention it, the story say "THE SEER SEES ALL" but the picture says "the seer watches all"...just wondering whether this was a mistake or intentional.

08 Nov 2013
cool so far

Comment Reidolol
23 Oct 2013
i agree,but still good,only fix it

Comment medusacascade
14 Jul 2013
Not too bad for a first game. Just FYI, that font is painful to the eyes.

Review Konrad
03 Jul 2013
A few problems with this.

1. Sometimes it appears as if we have choice, but only one choice will work.
Example:

>Leave flashlight off and keep walking<
"You find that you are only hurting yourself, and walk back."
>Go back<

So you're FORCED to >Turn on flashlight<

2. The text ends up really hard to read, especially those red hyperlinks.

3. The writing could do a bit of work.

Otherwise, its okay.

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