This is similar to the game that I made a while back, only this time, it is much longer, and much better, because I actually know how to make a game now. Please leave a comment and tell me if you liked it. All feedback is appreciated. Constructive criticism is welcomed. If enough people leave good comments, I will release the sequel that I have been developing. I also have a patreon where you can support my text-adventure game development, and get updates about what will be happening in the future regarding both this game, and any others that I might make. If you want. If you don't, want to, then don't. https://patreon.com/rolandjackson168
This game...where do I begin? The jokes are very hit and miss and if they hit, they don't make you laugh, the game is very straightforward, the in-game map is a cool feature but the straightforwardness of the game makes it unnecessary, the game throws anything at you like Your Mom and Unicornland. I don't know what people were thinking when they rated it a 5. Checkmate.
Very much a beginner game. Short, curt, and most of the jokes are stated rather than told. For reference-- don't tell us we changed the channel to Archer; describe a scene from it on the TV, and let the player deduce "Oh! It's an Archer joke! That's funny!"
Also:
-Most NPCs were pointless.
-Glad to know our player character is some obese greasy gamer dude. Might have been funny had it been executed a little better (though to your credit, you did "show" us this more than tell us, this time).
-I feel like there was supposed to be a joke with the hippo, but there was no punchline.
-Ending Rooms.
This seems more like 'work in progress' than a complete game. It is short, straightforward, has sudden endings, and the scoring system is under developed. It would be a good idea, for example, to explain the score at the end against what is possible.
I liked the use of the map but as the game is short and mostly linear it is probably not needed at the moment.
One issue I noticed was that items to be eaten, when taken, no longer offer 'eat' as a verb; 'use' is there instead but has no effect. This means 'eat' has to be typed directly.
I absolutely LOVE this game for it's humor alone! There are some... Bizarre things, but that only makes me more excited to see what the game will throw at me next. I can't wait for the sequel!
Average rating
(3.9)
Written by rolandjackson168
Plays 6317
Downloads 2049 Download file
Written for Quest 5.5
Published 03 Mar 2016
Updated 22 Nov 2016
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