The Factory by SollyStartles

Review funkyspunk90

Not that developed - As the author said, they just made it for a bit of fun, and it's not very long or detailed.

Comment LIMITED PIXEL

SollyStartles, if you ever return to Quest I'd love to see an adaption/reimagining of this story!

Review LIMITED PIXEL

My only problem is its short length. I found it reasonably creepy, but what i was really intrigued by was the ending and the story you must have come up with to make it. After finishing it, the beginning also adds to my curiosity. Would love to see this concept expanded upon.

[[Literal spoiler]] Also, sugar on your already frosted flakes? Really?

Review Tom C.L.

That was more interesting than creepy. I would like to find out more about the story, but the purpose is to wonder about what is happening, no?

Review blackjak24

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Comment Ethan+22

Pretty good, but I would've enjoyed more play.

Review Claire6129

I guess I'm a bit too genorous to give you a whole 5 star, but hey, this was good!!!
Please try out some of my stories, they're pretty short, too! (Lost Dog, Slender Park, Memory Path, and many more!)

Comment Claire6129

WHOAAAAAA!!!!!
Loved it! Totally unexpected, and the- ERROR- at the end made it even more suspenseful!!!