My only problem is its short length. I found it reasonably creepy, but what i was really intrigued by was the ending and the story you must have come up with to make it. After finishing it, the beginning also adds to my curiosity. Would love to see this concept expanded upon.
[[Literal spoiler]] Also, sugar on your already frosted flakes? Really?
I guess I'm a bit too genorous to give you a whole 5 star, but hey, this was good!!!
Please try out some of my stories, they're pretty short, too! (Lost Dog, Slender Park, Memory Path, and many more!)
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Written by SollyStartles
Plays 2974
Downloads 1811 Download file
Written for Quest 5.4
Published 31 Dec 2013
Updated 31 Dec 2016
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