Great grammar, but it relates too much to Scourge's story. My suggestions are to use fresh ideas.
Do more please! I love it so far but its SOO short.
Its so long,nice grammar, OMG the controls and interactions. I can never make somethin this good!
Short, and the plot is so plain.
I give it a 2 out of 5. If you need help with games... i'll always be able to help