Not bad! Missing some capitalization and is very short, but really great for your first game! 4 stars, keep up the good work!
I love this game! Its very long and it's not extremely easy to die! It's really good!
It was a great game, but it was unbelievably short and the grammar was poor. Keep working on your grammar and edit it so it isn't as bad! There's room for more. Keep making games and don't let a 2 star rating bring you down!
Its not terrible, but some capitalization is missing, it is very short (shorter than my games) but at least it works. Giving 3 stars.
Great grammar, but it relates too much to Scourge's story. My suggestions are to use fresh ideas.
Do more please! I love it so far but its SOO short.
Its so long,nice grammar, OMG the controls and interactions. I can never make somethin this good!
Short, and the plot is so plain.
I give it a 2 out of 5. If you need help with games... i'll always be able to help