Warrior cats game: Moonray clan part 1/3 { on hold, editing, sharing, and love always welcome though} by scarly woods


hey guys I have taken a little break and I just wanted to say I am been having a huge writers block. I love your comments and I plan to finish this as promised. Just taking longer than planned especially with COVID-19. (April 22 2020)
(to be continued) You start as a kit in Moonray clan. There are four clans around you. Moonray clan is your clan, Goldenmoon clan, Moonshine, and last but not least Bloodmoon clan. Just enjoy <3 please leave comments and reviews to know you tried it and tell me what you think, also I have much to add so it won't be finished for a few months or something due to all the endings and paths I want to add thanks! This game, however, will be finished soon, because it is getting long and this is now officially part one. I realized it was getting longe when It took a while to upload. If I add a lot more than it might crash. Besides now I can finally saw part 1 is finished! I will continue it and the next part will be about becoming a warrior and after that. Part three will be the ending at what you want to do, become a mentor then deputy, leader, starclan, loner, kittypet, and others I might add there. I'm going to finish soon thanks, my lovely readers! Every comment and review is helpful thanks! <3

I have edited pages 1-5 out of 22. I encourage you to correct me and help me edit my story. Just remember it's supposed to be present time and second-person form ( you, your,etc.). If I still made mistakes in pages 1-5 feel free to comment on that, or any recommendations to my story. I'm always looking to improve! I update frequency to check in at least once a week if you want to see this finished! <3

For those who said it's pretty long, your right. Which is why later on in the story I have optional reads on the left. read> ( that is what you need to read to understand the storyline) and optional> ( that's optional, you don't need to read it.)
I'll try to add this in the later chapters. Thanks for all the reviews and comments! I'll review your game as well if you ask. :)

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Review by Thecatofallcats
29 May 2020
Lots of grammar errors, but long.
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Review by warri0rcats
08 Apr 2020
I LOVED IT AND CAN"T WAIT UNTIL YOU FINISH, editing and the story line!!!!!!
(5)

Review by lil.ollie
04 Apr 2020
I thought it was amazing! there are a couple grammar mistakes, but other than that, its really good so far. I love your clan names, btw. I also really like your story line, but its a little confusing because a lot happens. otherwise its really great and i really hope you finish it, i would like to see the ending. :)



suggestion: press enter after a few lines when your making a long paragraph so it doesn't seem so long.
(5)

Review by Swiftthunder
22 Mar 2020
I though it was amazing! Just a few things tho. I don’t mind reading long long paragraphs but maybe you should still make some of them a little shorter. Also, I noticed some grammar errors that made it wierd to read. And maybe add a few more choices.
Other than that I love it! The plot, the characters, and I love the way you used the adjectives! I’m so sorry this is so long BTW
(5)

Review by PietroXI
21 Mar 2020
Very great game in terms of character and plot, excellent for any Warriors fan to play! The Erins would be proud. My only nitpick is there are a few spelling and grammatical errors (i.e., capitalizing cat's names, it should be "version" instead of "versian").
(5)

Review by Warriorcats908
21 Mar 2020
It's pretty good. Just make the paragraphs shorter though cause my eyes got lost.
(4)

10 Mar 2020
neat bit to long paragraphs though
(4)

Review by Detective
09 Mar 2020
Its a good game but instead of those LONG paragraphs, maybe press enter 2x after 7 sentences, my eyes hurt.
(4)

Review by Siena
08 Mar 2020
Great game
Ps can u please review my game
(5)

Review by ~Ivypool~
07 Mar 2020
This is a good game! I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. I hope you continue and finish it, I would love to get to the end!
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