Don Whitman's Masterpiece by normancrane

Review Wheezetopher

this definitely doesn't count as a game in my opinion, so if you're looking for a game you should pass this one up. I wouldn't even count this as interactive fiction, and if that was the authors goal, they have a very very limited idea of what 'interactive' means. this is basically just a 'read my story and press the button to read the next part.' type thing here.

Review GameofChocolate

I really wish it had options and choices instead of just, "Here's my story, click some buttons."

Review stormfirej

Okay but I wish there was more options to decide the narrative.

Review hannaivety

i'm quite speechless. the whole thing left me in awe. this was such an amazing read, i loved every second of it. it just pulled me in! gosh, it just makes me want to read more of this!

this is an amazing text adventure, a must play!

Review Laufeia

Intriguing about society and what is the better decision in end.

Comment Something Moving Under The Bed

I love how simple the story is- like an urban legend, or creepy folklore - slowly building up. Interesting how atmospheric it is slowly clicking onwards through the short passages of text too, definitely adds something!

It can be hard as a horror story fan to find really original good storytelling that offers something a bit different (there are so many standard genre rehashes out there) - especially in novel mediums aiding originality like IF.
I made a blog for people into eerie storytelling trying to find pieces which are a bit more novel - www.somethingmovingunderthebed.com -I love simple archetypal eerie stories like these :)

Review funkyspunk90

Great atmosphere, I love the way the story builds, just the right amount of uncertainty!!
It reminded me (favourably) of a couple of other caving themed horrors I'd read!

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Comment Sapisvr.exe

Dude im scared now XCXC Great work!