I though it was amazing! Just a few things tho. I don’t mind reading long long paragraphs but maybe you should still make some of them a little shorter. Also, I noticed some grammar errors that made it wierd to read. And maybe add a few more choices.
Other than that I love it! The plot, the characters, and I love the way you used the adjectives! I’m so sorry this is so long BTW
I have a cat at home. And I honestly expected this to be terrible. I mean how can a game come close to what it is to really pet a cat? I was so very wrong. This is a really great game. Close as words can get. You very obviously worked really hard on this too.
| o.o | better than
| U U |-* a cat.
This is just as good as the last one! I finally lived too!
This is so cool! I can’t wait for the second one!
I’m really sorry but this is so. Bad. It’s really really short and what da flip LEAF it is a LEAF. Also, if you warn the clan of potential danger you definitely don’t get banished I mean come on read the books!!!
Fantastic! I can’t wait for the other games!
I really like this so far! It’s really detailed and I like how you put the pictureS of the cats above the page. I can’t wait for the finished version!
OMG I love this so much. It’s really hard to live. It’s also really funny all the ways Dan (you) dies. I had so much fun playing this.
I love it! Please continue it! It’s really great so far, but I’m always sad when the stories have no endings yet. Most of the time though it’s becuase the story is good. Please finish it, it’s great!
I once thought rocks were boring. You have proved me wrong in a hilarious and fun way. Now I know rocks are super awsome. I really loved being a rock.
This game is super funny! I love it definitely 5 stars.
This is so cool! But is it done yet? Because I couldn't get passed one part. If it is done can you please make a part two and continue the story? If so that would be great! This is really good so far. I love it!
This is so good I wanna play the 2nd one!!!!