The story and puzzles were well developed, but I didn't really like the style of writing. Characters could use development too.
The puzzles were very simple and the plot was ok I guess but the main thing is that the game doesn't really let the player do much in between lines of text.
Pretty well written, I like the style of the writing :D. Lots of details too.
I haven't even finished the game yet but so far it's been great!
Simply fantastic!! The story is very detailed but also keeps the player in the dark.
"Great game logic, Awesome story." There is hardly any plot or story, just a string of encounters. Explanations and descriptions are few. However, that could be made up for if there were decent puzzles but the encounters were very brief and not at all challenging.
And also, cheetahs don't live on islands. And they have been shown to have mild attitudes towards humans.
I liked the puzzles very much but some of the characters were a bit off. The detective (the player) wasn't a character at all and the scene where I arrested the murderer went a bit unrealistically. Also, the game had some unusual commands, and even if the player knew what to do, they didn't know which command they had to use. But overall, the use of objects was fantastic and there were a lot of tricky red herrings too :D.
Wow. This story was extremely well done and creepy.
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It's on the right track but the writing was a bit choppy and some parts just appeared out of the blue.
Yep, really no game at all here.
Eh...no thanks. The plot line is unrealistic, if it was that easy to escape why aren't we surrounded by criminals?
Eh, I didn't really like the writing. It isn't Warriors itself (I should know, I used to be a huge Warriors fan myself), but the author wrote everything as if at a distance.
Fantastic game, detailed and very good! Make more!