It's really good, but maybe try and put in paragraphs to make it easier to read. Overall it's a great game :)
It's a really good series. I like how you try add lots of excitement, and suspense on what will happen next-the only thing I'd say you to fix on is to make the story a little less confusing, such as artistTreble said. :)
Here's everything that happens in the game:In the Windclan nursery:
"Eaglekit, wake up!", your sister, Hawkkit, wakes you. Your mother, Falconflight, lies next to you and sleeps.
Literally. Nothing else.
Good game, but just needs to be finished, as when I clicked fire clan nothing happened...
I don't want to be mean, but it's OK. Grammar might need a fix, and maybe a few bits in the story, since don't you think scourge would be guarded by many other blood clan cats? And even if he is good at sneaking up on others, he'd get scented or heard by sure since there's many cats in blood clan. Other than that, it's good :)
This game is very good, though you need to work on your paragraphs to make it more appealing to read, and making it shorter but with more choices. Overall, it's a really good warrior cat game, and probably took a lot of effort!
FAR TOO SHORT. And the story is really bad. You die, nonetheless.
Honestly. Do better.
Sorry if I judged, but you have potential to do better!!!
Good, but you need better endings
I was actually working on a warrior cat game when I saw this and played it. It was actually very similar to mine! (I was going to do a cat with Snow in it's name, but changed it to Ash) it's okay, but maybe make it have more action, to hook the player. Overall, good job!
I really like the work you put in!
This game is the best one you've made yet!
IT IS SO SHORT AND THE STORY IS INCREDIBLY BAD!!!!🙄
It's OK, but seriously- a six moons time skip?! I expected it to be long. It's OK, but not as long as I thought, plus this game should be finished!
The description's nice, though.
This game is sad...hopefully his uncle died peacefully. But:
With every meeting there is to be a parting
The glory and warmth of summer soon changes into the harsh and bitter winter
Every birth must have a death owed to it, as that's the way it works.
As we take one last flight into the heavens, we know what will come in this journey.
PLEASE FINISH! Overall good game, and I like the drawings! It's good you did them yourself
It's OK, but if text adventures could be classified twice, I would say this is humor as well!
Yup, definitely work on spelling-no wonder it's a work-in-progress!
The only reason it's two stars is because of the pictures, which add some interest. And to be more scary, it's not just about the pictures-it's about the words...
This is quite a funny game, though a little bit rude😅
Maybe actually double-check your game before submitting it...?
This is a really good warrior cat game, but if you finish it then I'm definitely going to give it 5 stars!!!👍
This isn't that short! This is a good game, and I like birbs (And birds!) It reminds me of a bird game I created...😉
This is game is well written!
Good for your first game!
THIS IS DEFINITELY A WORK IN PROGRESS. But, seriously, you can't say a comment to another cat and then he like you suddenly! MAYBE you could read more of the books?!🙄
Really good game, but maybe make it a little longer. Please make another one!
WOW! The mini rhymes are SO GOOD. You probably worked hard on this game!!!😱
This is a hilarious game!
The pictures make it scary the most, but maybe work on the spelling...?👍
A fun game. But please finish it! (Maybe in your next game) And fix spelling mistakes. Other than that, very good!👍
Love the freaky pictures! Really scary...I'm happy I took the stick😁
OK, but you should finish the game.
It's OK, not as good as the other banana game.
This is a very funny game! I'm excited for the sequel!👍😄
The story is OK I guess but it's a little boring and there's some punctuation mistakes
Great game! I like to play this over and over.
OK, but NEEDS to be finished. Please finish! It's a good game, though.
OK, but has only one ending: When you die.
It's reaaally short. Like, seriously short.
Have you even read any of the books?! You can't get banished so easily!
This is an educational and fun game! Good job
A good game. Maybe make it longer
This is a very fun game! I like that it's dark and spooky...And I ended at the road.😄
This is a good, imaginative game!
Cool, but you should maybe add some more exiting parts. But it seems you've done a lot of work, so instead of 3 stars I give you 4! 👍
This is an interesting, scary game!
I don't speak Spanish, but I used google translate for this. It's a cool game!
Interesting...but I can't find out how to complete it!
Not much to do in this game. I still haven't even finished it! I can see you've put some work in it, though, so you get one more star.
It does have a huge variety of ways to die, and is a bit violent.
The story is OK, but you can kinda cheat at parts, such as the part where it says "If you have fought all the monsters, then go to page..." You can just click it and don't need to bother attacking any monsters!
This is an overall fun game. Well done. :)
This is a very funny game!
It's ok, but even though you said there's a way to win, I can't find out how
Good, but quite sad. Didn't expect that ending!
Yay! I think this game should be a puzzle. I'm saying yay because I won on my first try. It's a good game, but when I went on the roof I couldn't use the rope. 😢
HAHA. I like the emojis, and that this isn't that short. It is also funny, as you said. Good for your first game!!!😁👍
HAHAHa. Do you seriously just press a button and the games over?!
This is an OK game. (Yeah, spelling might need a check!) But a little short. Other then that, Good!
Cool game! Really descriptive and nice and long. It has an interesting story,too.
Hahaha. This is a funny game!!!
Short, but interesting. Liked the end...
Hahaha. I can imagine petting a cat with this game!!!
Ohh! This game was cool. I really like the mouse pic!!! It has a different perspective in horror...
So funny! I kept playing this game again and again to get different endings. So much fun!!!
Yay. I was waiting for part two! I'm excited for part 3!
It's okay-the pictures are basically the best part, but the spellings not really good...
Umm...I think this is quite inappropriate, but funny at the start...The other game you made about bread was funny,though.
Funny, but really short-only about five links you can press in the whole game. Seriously, you need to make it MUCH longer!!!
Whoa! The gifs made my mind go WHOOOO but seriously-this game is actually kinda fun! Play this if you don't mind gifs and like interesting games.
An interesting but actually entertaining-who knew a text adventure about bread could be fun? Very interesting indeed...
This really belongs in Comedy! This is a real funny game, too.
UMMM...Too short. I want to give you a good review, though as I love dragons. This is just a small quiz. Then a picture. Then that's it.
Super short! I agree with the other reviews that say this. And...I agree this is not really for small children!
This is a fun game! I like the hamster's name-Hammy is hilarious! Maybe make it a bit longer? You should make more funny Hammy games!
Really good game! It's as if Erin Hunter wrote it! Well done!!!
All you can do is move a few times and you can only take a mailbox key. You can't even use it! I think you should make it more fun...and fix the mailbox key!!!
Haha. This IS a good comedy game. Give yourself a pat on the back-this game is really fun.
Really-this is only good for people who know how to read polish! I don't know how to speak polish. All of the text is in polish!!!
This was SUPER cool and exciting! Want to play it again and again! It's just sad when I died playing with the friendly dog and falling into the icy cold water! But still, give yourself a pat on your pat! Good job!
It's OK but a little...well...BORING! Maybe make it more exciting?!
I'm sorry, I don't usually give bad reviews, but seriously?! The spelling! And it's just a page of stuff. You can't do anything, apart from read, and it's only one page long! We don't expect a game to end so quickly!!!
I LOVE DRAGONS. AND I PLAY THIS GAME ALL THE TIME. I LOVE THE GAME. IF YOUR READING THIS, THEN PLEASE PLAY THE GAME. IT IS SUPER FUN AND IS ONE OF THE BEST TEXT ADVENTURE GAMES XD.